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Arynetta's avatar

I really enjoyed this post! I learned sooooo much from shooting my first short. Especially as a writer, actress, director. At a certain point I was like “I understand now why people choose to just write and direct at first 😩😹.”

One of the main differences I noticed from reading the Date From Hell script and watching the short is that watching I was more caught up with the couple, and didn’t notice the grifter. So the reveal read more comedy, fun, even high camp (in the best way).

Reading, I clocked the grifter immediately, so was more on to the sinister tone. (Also I watched the movie first, so didn’t have the element of surprise).

And this script (and film) had some great comedic lines, like “Diary Queen” being a “status thing.”

Hilarious.

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Great film. I love how Bobby-Dean kind of ends up being the most sinister of the bunch.

And then there’s the drifter—chili-cheese fry munching, finger-lickin’, playing it cool in the corner?? No greasy stares this time. No obvious tells. Just a guy in the corner.

Maybe he finally learned that trying not to look like you’re lookin’… well, that’s the dead giveaway. Maybe he can pull it off nex—wait.

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